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Essay 2-02a: Comparison of Jude Low

Kazuyo, Mika (Minimamu blog), Riko (Writing class) are going to review David Jude Heyworth Law. His main work is Sherlock Holmes, holiday, mysterious invention of Hugo. The work which I introduce in that is Sherlock Holmes. This work is very popular, and the sequel is given, too. The main story is detective Sherlock Holmes (Robert Downey, Jr) and a fellow of London in 1890, and John Dr. Watson (Jude Law) of the lodger leaves to help a new victim of black Sir Wood (mark Strong) who killed five women in a ceremony. Two people prevent murder before a reply trade police inspector arrives, and the blackwood is caught by the police.

 Three months later, the strange action of Holmes makes Watson uncomfortable as usual. The marriage with the Mary Morse tongue (Kelly Riley) was decided, and Watson was to finish cohabitation in Baker Street 221B. Holmes meets blackwood performed a death sentence of at a prison at that time. The death that is not stopped of three people is caused more, and the blackwood says that the world will change. He was executed by hanging, and Watson confirmed the death afterwards.

Three days later, Irene Adler who it is a professional thief, and is an ex-enemy visits the basis of Holmes. She asked it for the search of the man named the rook Rio Don. When Adler leaves the room, Holmes tails her and witnesses a place meeting the secret mystery employer of the face. The missing Rio Don was the key to plan of the blackwood. I notice that Holmes is the only person letting a mystery man is a professor and be afraid of Adler.

 A role of Jude Law is a position supporting a chief character and, here, must show the friendship of Holmes and Watson. It is said that I was chosen because the low intended with Downey. I insisted on Downey emphasizing the quality as the officer of Watson, a doctor, a Don Juan, the part such as the gambler, and drawing it. An action and a comedy are contained, and, please watch it because it is a very recommended movie.

I'll introduce "Cold Mountain". This movie was made by Anthony Minghella in 2003. It is based on Cold Mountain by Charles Frazier. Starring are Jude Law as W. P. Inman, is a confederate soldier who deserts to meet Ada in war, Ninole Kidmanas Ada Monroe, a young woman who lived on Cold Mountain and loved Immanr, Renee Zellwegeras Ruby Thewes, a woman who helped to manage her farm when she was in troubles.

 I will introduce story. The stage is American Civil War, and pure love movie. Iman "Judo Law" injured, and he was carried hospital. He was retreated, but he thought he should come back war. He wanted to meet Ada" Ninole Kidmanas" because he kissed her before going war place, and he loved her. He decided to go out war place, and he aimed to walk to Cold Mountain. However, He was attacked by thug, and he suffered hunger and fatigue. While, Ada's farther died, and she lost menials. She couldn't manage farm, but Rudy helped her.

One day, Rudy's farther visited her, and he asked her to live with her. she rejected his suggestion. A few days, she heard someone dead in forest, and she and Ada went to forest, and they saw his farther and someone. At that very moment Imman arrived "cold mountain"、and he heard she went to forest, and he went to forest. He played confederate soldier in this movie.

 Comparing two movie"Sherlock Holmes"and "The Holiday", he was trouble because Imman was injured by bomb, thug, and hungry. Also, he should lose weight. He became dirty, and he endured cold windy, rain, and snow. He is nice guy, and he acts very well. This movie showed true love. He showed true love with Ninole Kidmanas. " He nominated leading actor of Academy Award in America and United Kingdom. If you see "Cold Mountain", you sure are moved. When you want to cry, I recommend this movie.

Jude Law is a famous actor from UK. I want to introduce about Holiday. Holiday is a Movie. It is a love story, meke us happy. Jude Law peformrd as single man who had died his wife. Also he had two child.

Biginning for story is one single woman sighed over her bussy job. Her job is movie's advertisement directer or company president. Her name is amanda and live in L.A. She had boyfriend at that time, but her boyfriend have many affair. So she was a single. Her house is a so big and have private pool. When she sighed over, she take holiday. She became to exchage her home to one woman from U.K. Also one woman sighed over about her boyfriend. And she is a single, too. She live in U.K., actually, Jude Law is a her brother.

One woman from U.K. is Iris. Also this role which she performansed is Kate Elizabeth Winslet. Kate is so famous actress. Especially, TITANIC. She is a good actress. And Iris had a boyfriend by Cristmas party, but she had heard one thing that her boyfriend get married with one woman who same place of work. Then she got her home. Her house is so cute. And she sighed over about surrow things, but she decided to take holiday. Iris and Amand decided to exchage home each other. This idea is so good. So, Iris and Amanda leave for hometown with holiday.

Jude Law performed as Greham. Since his wife had died few years ago, he didn't fall in love. At that time, he meet to Amanda. When he visit to his young sister(Iris), Amand lives in sister's home for holiday. Of course, Amanada and Grehame fall in love. But it has a many problem. He has two child, and she is a president of company in L.A. Story is a very interesting. Jude Law is so cool in this movie. Especially, Sherlock Holmes's role and this movie's role are so different. He is a so nice actor.Please recommend this movie, Holiday.

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plans for essay 2-02a

For our next essay, 2-02a, Judo Law, Hugo, I am going to review hugo.

My house

I'll tell introduce about my favorite place. My favorite place is my house because I have a niece in my house now. I love him because he is very cute, too cute. I think he grow up, and I give him what he want to. I don't found he is cute, but I eventually I love him. He always dance, and  he shake his hand, foot, and I touch his finger, and he grip my finger. It is very cute. I lone him.
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A convenience store

I'll introduce my favorite place. I like convenience stores, and I have free time, so I often go to one or another. I think they are good places because they have a lot of things there. For example, they  have magazines, books, a lot of foods, drinks,and daily things. I kill time to read magazines. Also, I think their toilets are very clean. Last day, I went to one which I often go there when I found there is a stand to wear a stoking. I surprised it.
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The park near my house

I'll introduce my favorite places. My favorite place is park near my house.I don't like it when it is afternoon because there are a lot of children there, but in the night, it is good place for  me. It is very silent, and  there is lawn on the ground. I lie down on it, and  I see star, black sky. However, I sometimes find someone there, and , at that time, I leave there.
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Free writing

Ten years ago, I had never studied English. Therefore, my English skills were nearly zero. However, now, I have studied English for 8 years. My English skills is a little good, but I should study more and more. I hope my English skill will be near native American after 10 years, and I want to live foreign country, and I hope to use English fluently.  Now, I always study TOEFL, and I want to keep it, and I will go foreign country.
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My university life

I become to 2 grade student, and I feel " busy" and "friend ship good "  because at first, I have a lot of home work. I use computer everyday. when I was fresh man, I used computer twice in a week. I was surprised that this different. However, I think they are good for me to level up my skills, because I started to read book in English, and I can understand sort sentence. it is very help me to resolve TOEFL.What's more, I want to understand books, and I start to remember word. Also, by started English central, I a little understand TOEFL listening. I'm busy, but all things is for me. I will hard study English.

Also, I have part- time jobs which is clam school, and tea-ceremony dishes shop. I work clam school every Saturday, and I work tea-ceremony dishes shop every Sunday. At first, I had trouble because I couldn't be accustomed to those difference, but I like them because I can talk a lot of people. When I work clam school, I can talk elementary school students, junior high school students, and high school students. When I work the other, I can talk old people. It is good experiment for me. However, I sometimes have trouble. When I worked clam school, I was angry my student because they obey what I said, I don't want to be angry, but I was angry some times. Also, I worked the other, and I broke glasses. My senior wasn't angry me, but I reflected my self.  I will work hard.

I like chatting. I become 2 grade student, and I talk verity people. For example, I talk green campas's people, department of English students, student of other departments, and old woman who goes to this university. I had enjoy time, and I learned about everyone's life.  I really grateful this circumstances. I never regret staying this university. I want to talk someone, and I will speak to him or her.

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